Love

by rissa   Sep 30, 2007


One day
everything was fine
everything was great
you were there
my life was in place

suddenly the next day
things flipped around
everyone i saw
had this disappointed frown
i couldn't help it
but be worried

i felt incomplete
i didn't feel me
you helped me through it all
even those days
even the days i yelled and screamed
was it that you wanted to help me get through it
or was it that you were told to help me

i felt human
i didn't feel unreal
letters we wrote
i keep them close to remind of you

my first true love
i keep you close to my heart
where you make my life steady and still

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  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Wow can really relate
    nice poem
    good job :)
    x xS

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    WonderfuL writinG 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    The idea or the sound on your expressions seems to be quite charming. tt's always my pleasure to read line by line carefully on all what you try to narrate. itt might take minutes to get its real emotion,. your expressions and its wave is a charismatic one. 'GOOD' Feel better and write more, inform me of any new, and I will take interest deeply without any hesitations dear.

  • 16 years ago

    by rain

    Thank you for the comment<3
    i thought this poem was excellent.
    fantastic job