That was wonderful.... it made me think of My utopia..hehehe

anyways, the flow was perfect. You really kept me reading. And, your word choice wasn't bad either. Through your words you were able to show the emotion of your poem.. :)

AMAZING. Gosh, I love your work, a lot. I`m really kicking myself for reading this before I finished mine lol, don`t even know if I want to enter mine and risk competing against this lol.

I love how you didn`t make it all sugar-coated, you made it bittersweet. Your perfect place is filled with happines,, but coated with a bit of pain, I love the whole aspect of this.

5.5
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This was truely a cute piece, sweet and painted a perfect picture of the way your sacred place would be. I loved the flow and ryhme scheme they were both spot on and didn't faulter at all throughout the entire piece. your word choice simple yet effective. Overall this was a nicely written poem such an enjoyable read. Well done keep on writing. 5/5 ~Mel

This poem is delightful, It begins with outstanding imagery as you take us through a realistic yet romantic trip through your mind heart and soul

This is a great poem.Amazing visuals,and awesome flow.I think I could go on and on about this poem's greatness.A truely amazing piece.Good work,
Miranda

Beautiful. Amazing imagery, so lifelike and romantic and cute, all together. And I love how you added that there has to be little sadness too, making that place truely perfect.
Flawless work. Keep up
5/5 Though it deserves more.

I LOVE IT. Of course, it placed [[even though there weren't many] it was AMAZING, darling. I absolutely loved it.

The whole 'opposites attract' part was probably my favorite part of the entire poem.
But, I loved the whole thing. (:

Keep it up.
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