Im not such a great poet myself, so, I really do not feel that I am the right person to critique. However, I thought it was okay. It was a little forced at times and it seems like you could have added a little more to it, but, over all it was okay.

I think it's good, i was a little confused about what you tried to say but when i read it again it was better... keep it up!

Thats an amazing poem i love it!!

An excellent example of true poetry. It had rhythm and flow, and was full of emotion, great job!

But to make the flow even better I would suggest going through and edit the punctuation ;)

This is a good poem, but it somehow feels incomplete like it is missing a couple of lines, but that might just be me. Other then that feeling of not being finished I thought that it is a really good poem. 5/5

Kalee

I thought that piece was okay. to me it didnt sound complete. I think you could use just a couple more effective words but over all you did a really good job and please keep writing . I really did enjoy reading that poem.

Um... hmmm where to start.... well first of all for your first poem on this website it was good but honestly i didn't really like it so much... not my style... try spell checking it and rewording some stuff... great work though

Pretty good. Not the best but still good.

Hey
You could improve it by making it flow a bit better
great poem though,
i can really relate to it 4/5
thanks for the great read

Love You Take Care

~Love Always And Forever Icka~

Hey great poem, i loved it , it was very well written

Ummm it wasnt bad but i think that y0u need t0 make it fl0w m0re. if y0u are talkin ab0ut the seas0ns keep 0n that track d0nt venture 0ff. stay with the main idea 0f the p0em. its a little all 0ver the place but keep 0n writting and y0u will s0on get the hang 0f it. like i said try and keep us readers in, by the first stanza i was l0st. i wasnt really int0 the p0em. Try and make it fl0w and stay 0n track

best regards

deathbyblade

I don't know the reason why
i feel this way for you
but there is no excuse
million seasons are the truth

and in every single season
i found the word 'love' for you

but i know you will just turn me down
the snow perishes without sound

spring will come soon
but you will never turn around.

rain will wash the street
muddy banks still breed

Sorry lol ^^ typo.

ok so heres my ideas, like you asked for them.

1. Capitalize all the first letters of each sentence.

I don't know the reason why
i feel this way for you
but there is no excuse
A million seasons are the truth

and in every single season
i felt the word 'love' for you

but fate tells me you will just turn me down
so painfully the snow perishes without sound

seasons pass, spring will blossom soon
but you will never turn around.

rain will wash the darkend streets
muddy banks still breed

I don't know the reason why
i feel this way for you.

How about that? pm me and let me know what you do xxx alex xxx

I thought that it was pretty good. 5/5 Hey can u comment on my poem?

Its a cute poem, I enjoyed it.
Maybe join some of the lines up so they all have equal lines? But thats a suggestion xD
Other wise I'm not sure what else to say, its really good hehe.
Keep em coming =P

Well the ideas was good an you actually do write rather well...
I think it could have been a bit longer and also u should use the whole season conceot a bit more than you did...

Otherwise its pretty good

I think that is a good poem

Its really good i like it!..

This poem still showed emotion in it and that's good but yeah..perhaps the word choice could've been better as well as how you made it rhyme. Just try and ease it out for a better flow.
cheers, josh

Ii like it,
its good :)
nice work.
xx