Wonderfully written peom, very sad and heartfelt...

Once again, great poem.

A well written poem, filled with deep emotion.

Its amazing but really sad...

I can relate very much to this poem....it flowed beautifully & was very powerful....awesome write!

Brooke<3

Thats a very good poem
sad :(
keep writin!
:)

Aww another we all can relate to, it's so hard watching a loved one die, i know the feeling. beautiful poem, yet again very heartfelt and i loved it. keep writing you have talent

This was beautifully written...you conveyed the pain and despair very wll in this write.

The imagery you created was wonderfully done, it painted very vivid pictures in my mind.

Flow was flawless throughout the entire piece.

I found this to be filled with such melancholy and heartbreaking to read, but a beautiful write nontheless.

Very beautiful. It had me crying for I work in a nursing home.

Wow that was amazing..it's terrible to know a loved one is dying and there's nothing you can do about it..I'm sorry for you. But the poem was great...there's always an upside:)