Just remember, my friends...

by DustInTheWind   Oct 3, 2007


Just remember that I love you guys
No matter what
I'd tie your ties
Even if I was cut

You were always my best friends
Made me so jolly so happy
I know you'll be there in the end
Even though we all feel crappy

No matter who was there
You would defend me
Even if I cut my hair
Really REALLY crazy

You steal my stuff
But I don't complain
Because I love you more than my gruff
And I don't have the courage of a lion's mane

But I do want to say this
Just in case you're reading
I should tell you; I insist
That I don't hurt myself; I'm not bleeding

I'm happy for all of you
And all the good things you may face
Sometimes we all face peril too
And leave others in the trace

Adding zeal to what's bare
You know that you would imply
That everything is not really there
And I'd leave you all with a sigh

I just wanted to remind you
Before a long December
To tell you that I love you too
And I wanted you to just REMEMBER.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Aww! i love you too angel! :DD the only thing i didn't get was the defending part...and the hair part in the same stanza. But oh well. ur work of art! luv ya gurl

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    I got the gist of your poem and I rate it a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    A few mistakes. Simple things like your and you're. It was an alright poem. I wasn't big on some of the stanzas but I enjoyed the last line. Some of the rhyming didn't sound...how should I put this...Well it just sounds like you couldn't think of other rhymes so you just went with it. I wasn't big on that. That's just me though. Overall I'd give it a three.

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