Well this reduced me to tears, and I think that already says enough about how amazingly well written this is. Heartbreaking, yet done in such a style that it's beutiful and pure. Raw emotion run all throughout this poem. It honestly is so touching. Wow!

"How can someone who's meant to love me
Succeed in making me feel so low?"

^these lines especially..and are just so good.
keep it up! :)
--Viola

My heart just broke into a million pieces. This is...wow...

The pain you dealt part was done nicely, overall great poem, good format, and a strong message.

your servant:
atticus

This is so very sad indeed! 5/5 Wow.

I literally felt the pain from your words. You're a great writer with so much emotion that makes your words come to life. I just hope things get better for you. 5/5