Autumn Lovers

by lexie   Oct 5, 2007


Oh baby isn't it beautiful,
the way the sun bounces off the trees?
The fall colors,so bright and capturing,
Your hand in mine.

This love is so deep,
My heart is yours to keep,
I'll love you until these trees die,
Until they lose that vibrant color.

The way your eyes stare into my soul,
This trust I put in you,
Let down those walls around my heart,
You bring me back to the person I once was.

The winter is coming so soon,
And the cold causes some dark thoughts,
Will you save me,
from the bitter reality?

Show me heaven,
And I'll be just fine,
Show me your love,
and I know I'll survive.

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  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    The begginning of this poem was really beautiful, the description and flow was totally gorgeous and i loved it.....however, the last phrase ruined the poem pretty much with it's lack of sincerity (cheesiness) if i were you i would probably change that so it didn't affect the flow and beauty of your poem.
    3/5
    gabriella