Excellent!

For this one, I can see much realism and imagery beyond life. The concept is great as well as the words used, the words usage were great and conveyed thoughts on it.

"The empty world"
well i think the title is not well related to the topic of the poem, but it was just me^^

Keep it up!

That was a very beautiful poem. full of emotion...I loved it

So sweet for you to write this heartfelt poem to your brother, I bet is such a wonderful person to know. The emotion is hearfelt, the word choice is excellent, and the message is clear. 5/5

Great Expressions 5/5
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I think you right autism is just a blessing in disguise...anyway nice poem...^_^ 5/5

Hey! Thanks for the message! I will consider it. Love your poems! You are a true poet!

Wow Amazing!
5/5

I enjoyed this poem you displayed his life very well and I am happy to have read this piece Plot121