Comments : I Submit; I Deny!

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    Good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    Very nice short piece... undeniably great.. keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Short simple, straight to the point and i loved it very much!!
    keep up the grat work!!
    bree tk care
    xx

    please read and comment on some of my poems even some of the earlier stuff to if u wish!!
    thanks
    tk care

  • 16 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    Great Poem... =]]

  • 16 years ago

    by shadowcat

    Pretty cool!
    =D

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Your poem is really delightful. Short but wonderful. It had excellent flow . Thank you for posting this nice write

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    Dude love your pom its awsome (^_^)

  • 15 years ago

    by Jaimee

    Fantastic =D
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    I love this, its very romantic! ~Sasha~

  • 15 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    WoW ... man I love that poem ...

  • 15 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    Wow ! I really like it ! ur talented :)!

  • 15 years ago

    by Rowena Smith

    Wow this is great! Short but sweet with a nice rhyme.

  • 15 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    Lyrical & mysterious, good poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I really like this, its short but i dont think it needs to be any longer as you have expressed a lot in a few lines. well done :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    Wow, it's amazing how a short poem managed to bring across such strong emotions. Commendable effort!

  • 14 years ago

    by Biya

    Very nice poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Chocolate Addict

    Sorry I have to disagree with the previous comments given to you, I think that this poem is pretty childish.I don't know why you like to put '!' at the end of some of the sentences. Almost majority of the words are repeated in your previous poems. It's just to predictable on what rhyme is going to be in the next sentence.

    She is the Moon?! I Submit; I Deny!

    ^^^
    This doesn't make sense at all, what do you mean, by you submit then you deny?Seems like you are contradicting yourself.

    Well then again I guess it's forgivable as English is not your main language.

    No hard feelings, but the truth is, I can tell you all the beautiful lies you want to hear but it would only let you write within your own comfort zone, cause nobody dares to tell you that this piece it no where near a 3rd grade standard.

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet Keen

    I like every single rhymes you compose

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet Keen

    I like every single rhymes you compose