Good work 5/5

Nice

Very nice short piece... undeniably great.. keep it up.

Short simple, straight to the point and i loved it very much!!
keep up the grat work!!
bree tk care
xx

please read and comment on some of my poems even some of the earlier stuff to if u wish!!
thanks
tk care

Great Poem... =]]

Pretty cool!
=D

Your poem is really delightful. Short but wonderful. It had excellent flow . Thank you for posting this nice write

Dude love your pom its awsome (^_^)

Fantastic =D
5/5

I love this, its very romantic! ~Sasha~

WoW ... man I love that poem ...

Wow ! I really like it ! ur talented :)!

Wow this is great! Short but sweet with a nice rhyme.

Lyrical & mysterious, good poem

I really like this, its short but i dont think it needs to be any longer as you have expressed a lot in a few lines. well done :)

Wow, it's amazing how a short poem managed to bring across such strong emotions. Commendable effort!

Very nice poem

Sorry I have to disagree with the previous comments given to you, I think that this poem is pretty childish.I don't know why you like to put '!' at the end of some of the sentences. Almost majority of the words are repeated in your previous poems. It's just to predictable on what rhyme is going to be in the next sentence.

She is the Moon?! I Submit; I Deny!

^^^
This doesn't make sense at all, what do you mean, by you submit then you deny?Seems like you are contradicting yourself.

Well then again I guess it's forgivable as English is not your main language.

No hard feelings, but the truth is, I can tell you all the beautiful lies you want to hear but it would only let you write within your own comfort zone, cause nobody dares to tell you that this piece it no where near a 3rd grade standard.

I like every single rhymes you compose

I like every single rhymes you compose