Immoral Sensations (Quadruple Doditsu)

by Wallace   Oct 6, 2007


Dreams of dreadful emotions
Imperfectly enthralling
Enticing humanity
Vile and unruly

Wishes of melancholy
Crestfallen and heartbroken
Residing insanity
Invading abyss

Aspirations of sorrow
Confined deep in agony
Cursed by hellish obsession
Stained with suffering

Desires of misery
Proceeding impurity
An Immoral sensation
Condemned forever

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Doditsu-Consists of 4 lines, syllables going 7-7-7-5

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow nice style to choose i liked it 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow, very beautiful and descriptive! Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by peaceandharmony

    I really liked it, good job.

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