by Tanisha Hicks Oct 7, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
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Knowing someone who is suicidal |
by teresa
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I like but i think it could be better if you make it less like a story and more like a poem. i feel as though you were telling me it and not showing it. that is something i always look for in poems. i think it has lots of potential. |