Short but well written 5/5 keep writing and I will keep reading

This short but precise, nothing fancy but it worked for me, i loved this...

Despite being relatively short you managed to pack so much emotion and meaning into this and that is not always am easy thing to do. the only thing i didn't like about this was the constant use of "I" but apart from that, this was nicely done...a heartfelt and moving piece.

Yeah, this totally describes my situation right now. i try so hard to get my girlfriend to talk to me more so we can actually get to know each other and build a foundation of friendship but she never calls me cause shes so paranoid of awkwardness but i just want to be free and comfortable with each other. great poem

Loved loved loved!! the last stanza it was brilliant but the other stanzas need a tad bit of fixing for example maybe more emotion because I don't feel that you expressed that true feeling of anxiuosness(sp?) enough and again I think it could've been a tad longer
5/5

Very mournful poem and well structured. Both poetically and lexically strong and cohesive.

tc
Fsams

It was very short but you also were
able to put so much emotion into this
piece. i loved it, thought it was great,
a bit sad when i think about it. but
5/5 from me.

nikki

This one makes me sad cause i know what ur feelin.

Lovely
short & beautiful

keep it up
love
amy

I liked this poem it was short and" a little too much throughout this poem because it seemed forced in some places but that is just my personal opinion. The piece held some good emotion with in it though I didn't find it to be that interesting it still expressed your feelings in depth. Nicely done. ~Mel

Ok I'll start with the positives ..

~Positives~
As always; filled with emotions, it's basically a calling card of yours that this will be written with nothing but raw emotion. You held the flow of the poem nicely throughout the poems entirety.
You got your point/message across perfectly, as you have seemed to do in most of your work.

~Negatives~
It seemed forced right from the very first line, now I'm not saying these things didn't happen to you .. but you maybe didn't pick the best sentences to use to express them to their fullest. The one thing I have noticed from all your other poems is just how truly genuine they are... This was lacking in that respect.

If I was to simply read the text, it would be a fine piece of writing - but as soon as you look deeper .. it loses that shine.

Not your best work, but if re-worked I'd be more than happy to comment it .. hopefully in a whole new light!

~Pete.

This is an okay poem not bad ...I kinda relate to it though.