Very deep. filled with passion and a heartfelt, yet bitter soul. the epitome of life, beyond the human form, taking place and weakening. beautifully expressed vision onto paper......

salwa

Really beautiful, can feel the sadness and despair.....

Beautifully depicts the void in your life.

Nice read small suggestion would change the
to where hope is mearly thanks for the kind comment to my write keep up the great writting also there is another site where folks would like to read your works its calley poetrysoup.com free to post also blessings my friend

Very inspiring poem I felt the sadness there.

Wow beautiful write
captivating in its words
keep it up.

I like the emotion conveyed by this poem, a kind of bittersweet sadness in my opinion. The only things I think you need to keep an eye on are punctuation and where you start a new line. Apart from that, I would say I like this poem very much. 4/5

This is a nice peice

Very nice poem i really liked it

Hi how are you?thanks for inviting me to visit here in your account. you know have a nice poem!

This truly was a very emotional read. The words heralded the unbridled grief and overwhelming pain. Well done

Wow..i loved this...very sad but very beautiful.....

Deep grief and sadness beautifully and succinctly expressed

Good work, it grabs and keeps the reader's attention, your pain reaches out and touches those who read it. Keep writing!!!

What a sad poem, yet so beautiful written.
Great job
Take care

A beautiful read! A reminder of why I love poetry. It was easy to read because of the lovely rythmic flow and the emotions expressed so eloquently. Thank you.

Well written and beautifully penned...great job, keep it up 5/5

Thank u for ur supportive words

This is a very poignant poem, beautifully expressed desolation and sorrow. A very moving poem. Thank you for sharing it

Avery effective ,emotional,and clear vision of your mood i really liked it