Comments : How Do I Tell You?

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I like it
    I love the emotion and the meaning
    The only thing that i would suggest is to maybe think about a rhyme scheme and the structure of the stanza(ex: 4 lines 3 lines)
    Overall though. that was a good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Well done on a great write. A very good expression of your feelings, warm and heartfelt. keep them coming

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Ok this one is a poem about secret love.. well yeah i know how it feels and through this poem i can picture our a painful scene but honestly this poem will look more interesting and captivating to readers like me if you enhance your vocabulary and imagination. hinder from using the same words over and over. keep it up dear, i know you can give more than this.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    REally sweet poem...very well written piece of work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Well the feelings were there but i dont feel as though it was expressed to your fullest potential. You really need to work on your flow and coming up with complete thoughts
    3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    HEY!
    great poem, 5/5 love this heaps,
    i can relate 2 this one
    thnx for commentin mine 2!
    love

  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    I love your work! 5/5 glad that you like mine too

  • 16 years ago

    by Julie

    Wonderful job! nicely written and full of emotions.....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Hey, thank you for commenting my poem! I really like the meaning in this one, very touching. Keep it up! Love Greta.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow...really good piece really great flow ! i like the meaning you put behind it <33

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Hey thanx for the comment on my poems, this poems is really good, i liek how long it is. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "I want to tell you
    That i love you
    But i don't know how"

    So many times people feel like this.. and you've managed to portray it perfectly
    Well done!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Nina

    Hey nina here
    this poem is so sad but good 5 out of 5:)

  • 16 years ago

    by BlackRosex

    You can tell its from the heart.

    "You showed me that there was hope
    And told me not to let go
    You helped me think of the good things in life"

    Thats so true =]
    Theres always a positive side, even if you cant find it.
    [xxx]

  • 16 years ago

    by a bUi

    Lovely :)

  • 16 years ago

    by That One Girl

    Wow!I have the same feelings for a guy named Riley! great job! well worded5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Nice poem written very nicely
    u are so talented a 5/5 from me as u truly deserve it

  • Great poem. I really loved the way you wrote it.

    Keep up the good work!!!

    5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Bobbi

    I love this poem! I teared up because I'm in that boat right now. Keep up your writing!

    ~Bobbi

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    This is a great piece keep it up i really enjoyed reading this :) 5/5

    --emz--