I really like this cause i can relate so much to it. the words described the pain very well, powerful. keep it up

Amazing. How you could almost put my exact past into words, is just totally awseome.

Wow. Good and interesting rhyme scheme. I liked how it was in groups of four and ended in five, I like to how short and sad it is. I really think that this one has little room for improvement.

I like this....!!!!

Wow another superb poem of yours. Its poetically and lexically strong. I really appreciate your work

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Fsams

This one was very sad but very good written.
I really hope you don't cut yourself though, but I can understand why people do that to themselfs.
People who do this please get some help.

5/5

xo angelique

Wow, very sad. there's no words for a feeling like this, besides depression. but it was a good write with a strong emotion

your servant:
atticus

I can really relate to this poem and I believe that a lot of other teenagers can too.It was so sad and so captivating,I couldn't stop reading it.You managed to capture my attention and keep my attention,which is really hard to do,so I give you major props for that.The flow was pretty smooth but the meaning and pain put behind it was flawless.So far this is my favorite poem of your's.Excellent work!Keep up it up.I give you a well deserved 5/5

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