Greatly written poem, you should finish it. I like the way you wrote it, you have great flow hear and really good descriptions. I also like the topic very much.
All questions that you asked through the piece leave great impression and adds massive effect to the flow of the whole piece.
It's so true how one decision can shape the course of your life, and although we might not know it at the time every little decision we make no matter when we make it, affects us. Excellent work once again 5/5 GG23 second last line you have "his" when you were trying to put him. Take care
12 years ago
Hey this is really good.
i liked the flow in this one.
and id like to read it when you finsih it =]