Save me

by with this small heart i give u all   Oct 12, 2007


A flame is lit
lit in my heart we didn't start with this part
a cloud from the sky blinds me from my view
i try to find you but u hide as if Ur in danger
am i the stranger?
i cry as because I'm losing you and your running away I'm trying to put u were we can stay
if Ur trying to run away from me cuz your tired of my heart just undo the part u said u love me with all your heart then take away the kiss and save me from my life....cuz u just took it away..one more breath is all i need u just left carelessly
i needed a hug nor did u at least give me a shoulder...save me cuz I'm dying from your careless needs thanks for breaking my plead..save me for i am dying helplessly

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  • 16 years ago

    by kimberly dennis

    For me it is an alright poem. the only thing that i didnt like about this poem is you keep using cuz and for me that gets old but pleaz i would love to read more of your work. im not saying its not good . it is a sad poem that you can feel all the emotions come off of the page and for that is why i like this poem.

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