Comments : Bleeding Crimson Rain

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    So creative, unique and truly beautiful, you wrote this one with so many feelings and you truly create powerful atmosphere. Very deep poem, personal and filed with so many of yours amazingly expressed emotions. I love it, imagery is also excellent and you put your self in it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I cannot say much more than DarkSpirit did, other than this was truly an amazing write, I loved the flow and the words jumped from the page. Timothy r

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This piece is really unique, I loved this amazing write. You have no idea how talented you are with poetry. Your word choice beautiful as always. You create such an interesting story within your poems. Loved this. Well done. Keep on writing. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow truly descriptive and i could feel the pain 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Solus

    Now and never......such little words with so much meaning. Again you've shown why I continue to come to this site.

  • 16 years ago

    by Resplendant Rose

    This is gorgeous...
    It sounds like you took your heart and poured it into your words. I can almost see the conveyed images in my mind. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very interesting read, never would of thought to use that kind of wording in a love poem. Great write, with a good flow.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    Its So Differnet And Effective And Inspiring And Emotion And Amazing And Beautifully Done!! Perfect In Every Way!!!
    perfectlyBROKEN xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Coco

    Truely brilliant....absolutley amazing....u have an amazing gift.....keep it up.....WOW!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    Your vocabulary is astounding me I love your use of words but its like your beating a bush and never reaching the core of what you want to say. Oh well I liked the description anyways. Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Hmm im nt really gttn a clear picture here.. but ur wrds r soo. deep.. i mean.. they just attract the reader.. the way u play with wrds.. its like u mastered poetry.. srslly. ur epoems r awesome.. like othrz.. this goes fr 5/5 gr8 skiill

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Amazing work! No words to describe how good this poem was! Just beatiful! all i can say is wow, and i wish i could write this good! You have a gift! Keep up the great work! Rate this a ten!

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Wow, this was beautiful my favourite by far. I loved the first line it capturvated me. Really well done with your poems xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    The first stanza was amazing, even the first line. I'm glad I got to read it again at the end lol. Which, by the way, was a perect way to end this amazing piece. I feel like i just keep repeating myself but, I will say it again... great imagery and amazing vocab. 5/5

    marcella

  • 15 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I love how you repeated the first stanza in the last stanza. It just totally grabbed the readers attention as an opening and topped the poem off as an ending.

    I like the fact that you painted a vivid picture and used details to be so descriptive.

    The third stanza:
    "Would you be my guide, please
    through the meadows turned to stone?
    With the heart on the sleeve I surrender
    while the fire rages in bones."

    ^^Grasbbed my attention the most. Largely because I have felt this way so many times and was left wanting to surrender my life for a moment that seemed forever frozen in time.

    Overall.. good job!

    ~~Sher