Under the sky

by theUSEDheart   Oct 14, 2007


You take my hand
looked into my eyes
i can barley stand
its not how i planed

your words spoken
whats wrong
my eyes fill with tears
that was enough
it was the hint

taken in your arms
i cried
no pressure
but you still tried

when strong enough
we sat under the night sky
not saying a word
holding each other

i addressed you in fear
that you would leave
after what i was going to say
i looked you in the eye

and said the words
you wished to not hear
we were to young
so i whispered
in fear
we have formed our first child

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  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    The ending was a total twist and I had to read the poem many times to get it all... It was still beautiful and emotional. 5/5 all the way grl

  • 16 years ago

    by Blake

    Wow that was really good nice wording and...wow that was awesome