Do i make u proud

by more den just a broken smile   Oct 14, 2007


Too me u were always this wonderful person
u were always lots of fun
there was noting that u wouldnt of done
too me u were my sun
then came a dark cloud, who was very angry and loud
i always wanted to know if i made u proud???

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  • 16 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    The Flow In This Was Great, The Rhyming Fits In.. Keep It Up
    Take Care, Luv
    Hanz xx It Shutld Be 10/10 :)

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