Deeper into the feeling

When Im at my saddest I make rhymes
To express what I feel inside
For someone to know
The feelings that I try to hide

I might be silent
Coz im waiting for the time to speak
I might not make a move
But Im not weak

Its really hard to wait for the moment
Not knowing if its already passed
But Im taking the chance for this to work
Coz I really want it to last

Taking my time to get to know you
Longing for your loving
Wanting you more each day
Getting deeper into the feeling

pls tell me what you think about
this poem...thanks...