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by nering   Oct 14, 2007


Guys this poem is not that great it is just to help me try to rid my writers block...be critical--help me improve it...I'm willing to hear how to change it...Thanks

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Life isn't always predictable,
Nor complying or simple.
You have so many choices,
And a lot of voices,
That you must sift through

The questions are always the same,
Who am I to blame?
Do I live my life in shame,
Or keep up with the game?

As life progresses it becomes more complex.
Your past and your future will reflect.
You must always inquire goals,
To satisfy the burning soul.

You should never use hate,
Because that disarrays fate.
It only makes things worse
And you will be left with the curse.

To make life more graspable,
Don't try to be predictable.
You have so many choices,
But now there is only one voice.
The voice is yours, the life is yours!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    :) I like it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelvin Masi

    I can't change anything, everything is alright as it seems in my minds eye. I like your poem its such so sweet, with some rhymin schemes. keep up da gud work!! 5/6

  • 16 years ago

    by Fabz

    Hey thanks 4 da comment on mine poem, I thought the poem was good man, I wana read the rest ov ur poems but my college computer wont let me :( but if dis is anyting ta go by they must b really good, 5/5 il try read ya other poems too

  • 16 years ago

    by NottShawn

    Hey this was a very good poem but the best way to get over writers block i think is not to just throw words together that rhyme and all that but to use your life experiences and write with them and write what you are feeling if your sad write why if your mad write why just write on everything but the best thing that worked with me was write how i was feeling and my life experiences but you did a very good job and you need to keep up the good work and the more you write the less you will have of a writers block and the better you will get just remember 2 things practice makes perfect and set your goals low and you will suceed

  • 16 years ago

    by Prince Charming

    I love it for having writers block that was great very strong ending while still keeping the reader interested throughout great job.

    PrinceCharming,

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