Savior

by Jacob M Parnell   Oct 15, 2007


Someone save this world,
For I fear I can not.
Something needs to be done.
Stop praying to god, I think he forgot.

We're here alone,
Unhappy in our content.
Fearing the afterlife,
We are desperate to repent.

Forgive me father for I have sinned.
I've seen through false belief.
And although I feel placid.
I'm afraid I've caused myself grief.

Life wouldn't be so bad,
If I could come to your kingdom in the sky.
But unfortunately I have sinned.
And it is you that I deny.

It is the religious who detest me,
Tell me I'm destined for hell.
But I've been living in it for some time.
I believe I know it well.

This must be the second the world,
The afterlife for who I was back when.
Because this must be hell,
Maybe I should pray, I don't want to do this again.

I'm pretty sure I've seen the devil.
Strolling along in Time Square.
Preaching the end of time.
And asking for cab fare.

I'm not sorry for my beliefs,
If you're there you should do something quick.
This world is slipping,
It's making me sick.

Give me back my ignorance,
Fill my life with joy.
Hurry while no ones looking.
I'll start a war as a decoy.

Just do something please,
It's getting harder to survive.
Send this world a savior.
Make us feel alive...

(c) Jacob M Parnell

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • I dont believe in God, but I can see the point to in this poem. It's really well written. 5/5.
    DoubleEdgedRazorBlades

  • 16 years ago

    by the simple girl

    Your words never fail to amaze me. I think this is something we have a bit in common, as I do not believe what most others believe either. Although I also believe that if it is hell that we are living in, then we might as well made it the best place to be. Because perhaps the savior is already here. Waiting for someone to discover them.

    ~Ashley

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow...really good choice of words i loved it the poem had excellent flow and truth to it 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Shanice Jones

    Look the God i serve is jesus christ and he will make you feel so alive just give him a chance and you will see and you will thank me! but for its not me its jesus christ!! just look him up and you thank me for the seed i have planted in you! just look into jesus christ!!!!!!!!!

More Poems By Jacob M Parnell