Letting it Go

by Lyndsay Kalyta   Oct 16, 2007


She used to stumble in the darkness
Now she's soaking up the sun
She'd pray all night for Mr Right
Now she knows you are the one

She used to cry herself to sleep
Now she's crying tears of joy
She'd hide herself from the world
Now she's all yours to enjoy

She used to hold her heart close
Now she's letting it go tonight
She'd stand firm and not back down
Now she surrenders in your sight

She used to lock up her feelings
Now she's letting go of them, it's true
She'd never believe she would get her dream
Now she has fallen in love with you

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  • 16 years ago

    by browneyezz

    Awww this was a great poem great job

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I LOVE this poem! You are very consistent in the structure. Not only did you switch from she/now the whole poem but each line would contrast from the previous one. I loved the line about her surrendering in his sight. Beautiful! Thanks for your comment on my poem. You really took the time to share your thoughts and it was MUCH appreciated!
    *ME*

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