Written In The Stars

by Beautiful Chaos   Oct 17, 2007


Nothing has been as sure,
As the love I feel for you,
Even when it hurts,
And we don't know what to do.

My life it was a battlefield,
Every day a war,
You took me far away from,
All I did abhor.

Awakening my courage,
You taught me to believe,
In all the good I never knew,
Or never could perceive.

The journey was not smooth,
A new wall everyday,
You'd come a few steps closer,
I'd try to run away.

You finally tamed my wild spirit,
Broke me from my past,
For once my mind did not doubt,
Our love was meant to last.

You swam within the murky ponds,
Deep inside my mind,
And never showed an ounce of fear,
For the things which you did find.

Written out among the stars,
Our love shall always be,
Everything I ever dreamed,
My eyes would come to see.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "my life it was. . . " << my life [[,]] it. . .

    Amazing poem, once again. Honestly, the best so far. (: You're A GREAT writer, as I've said already . Lol.

    My comments are probably a bit useless, but there's nothing I can honestly find wrong with them, other than a few minor things like commas and such.

    Amazing job. (:
    5|5

  • 16 years ago

    by Butterflye

    I like the AB rhyme format, works very well. Your word choice is great, the poem is very fluid. I love it!
    sincerely,
    Me.

  • 16 years ago

    by browneyezz

    That was a beautiful poem

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