This Train

by John Long   Oct 17, 2007


This train of thought has no first class coach.
Strictly second class with rain dirty windows
And the driver is lost.
But a mystery trip is much more interesting,
And when we reach that final destination,
No one is ever ready to get off.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    Another deep meaningful poem, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by John Long

    Thanks Kay, kind as always. And thanks for your BBQ poem, very funny!

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    And yet again you have captured a moment of being lost in thoughts. I know it was meant in a different way but I related to it much more with my long drive home, where it is my thoughts and memories that entertain me for the journey. And sometimes I am reluctant to end the long journey. But that is myself.....The procrastinator.

    Thank you for sharing,
    Kay

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