Magical Moment.

by babblingxbrooke   Oct 18, 2007


It was like a black and white movie without any sound,
the raindrops heavily hitting the ground.

our eyes locked and hands intertwined,
I would give anything to pause this moment in time.

soaking wet from head to toe,
in our own world and didn't even know.

occupying the street, was only you and I.
and the dark rain clouds hanging over us in the sky.

you pulled me close and our lips touched,
thunder roared and lightening struck.

then the sun peaked out, giving light,
all the darkness now shone bright.

the noise flooded back, the cars in the streets,
but the loudest of all was our heart beats.

to turn back the hands of time is my only wish,
to share that magical moment and our very first kiss.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tylor

    Wow.. this poem is going into my favorites :).. very well written, there isnt a way you can make this poem any better.. it is amazing.. 5/5.. but i would give you a 23432/5 if it would let me :).. keep it up.. i love your poems.. this one has very deep emotion.. i could actually picture the story you are telling inside my head.. please do right more like this one :).. absolutely.. positively love it in every way :)
    -Tylor

  • 16 years ago

    by iluvbradley

    Wow!! That was amazing!!