Ohhh teacup this is beautiful!! despite being relatively short i found this to hold so much depth and emotion, while the imagery you portrayed created very vivid pictures. this left me with such a contented feeling. beautifully written!

Very amazingly written
keep it up!
-Lisa

Truely a beautiful piece. You wrote this with so much elegance. Imagery was gorgeous. From such a simple title which I must say was unique you wrote a poem which captured my heart. Well done with this piece of work. I enjoyed reading it from start to finish. ~Mel

Wow, Willow, this is so touching, truly beautiful. I love your description in whole piece, they brought a smile to my face.
Whole poem is greatly written.

This is amazing because evrything flowed here! The imagery, the organization I mean wow!

AAAWWWWW that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!! HAHAHAHA I love this piece woman! My most favorite thing about watching kids is seeing them in that concentration when they go to licking their lips HAHAHAHA THAT IS SO CUTE!!! BEAUTIFUL MEMORY!

Wow, this is truly touching, every line is amazing and emotional. You wrote it with such beauty... I am impressed, you should be proud on your self. You put a smile on my face...

Congratulations on the spotlight!

Great job, congrats on the win, poem was very full of emotion, loved it

Congrats on the weekly win:)

Congrats on the weekly win:)

Aww thats cute. It was a pleasure reading.
5/5

This poem is so cute. I loved it. 5/5 Keep up the amazing work :D

Aww thats such a sweet piece, which creats a lovely picture in my mind of sweet lil children, great piece, xox sam

Willow my dear this poem is simply beautiful and very touching. It reminds me of many homeade ordiments that I have made over the years for my Christmas tree. You captured the mother's love so deeply in this poem. I loved it, it really got me into the spirit of Christmas.

Sweet!! =D

This is so beautiful,sweet,and cute!! =D

Beautiful and simple-I love it.

Very cute poem

Short and sweet, I kinda liked it