Wishing star

by NearlyCrazy6   Oct 18, 2007


If you see a shooting star
Wish upon it willingly
Because your good fortune isn't far
From that small light you see

Do not let your hope disappear
People will love you for who you are
But that little star is in view, so clear
shines through the your clouded mind so far

Pain is a week emotion
It cannot overcome love
And in that wishing motion
That star shines brighter above

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    P.S Please check the request I left you on the discussion board, the 12 for 40 thread, thank you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.

    This was filled with such beauty and elegance, and filled with so much depth and emotion.

    Flow is good throughout and the imagery painted created very vivid pictures in my mind.

    Beautifully written.

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Wow. this is amazing. i love it very much. and im gonna read all ur poems. but im not gonna comment all of them.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyrodo

    It was pretty good ^^ I like the whole meaning behind it. So Kyri hopey Oo

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