Wow, the words in this is so true about how sevweral people feel.. i feel this way now and the feelin wont go away.. i loved this very much

Okay um no offense but the "u" and "driftin" dont add anything, and make it a bit im-ish. the prose-like style's really original though, and i love the last bit about the tears =)

I find this bittersweet and sad. overall its a good poem you make the flow just a little better but 5/5
Take Care
xHSx

Short and sweet, with a touch of sadness....overall it was well written although with an odd form...not confusing in the least bit though. Interesting 5/5