When...

by Shotput Girl   Oct 19, 2007


When i walk by u
do u think
nothing at all
or do u think
wow, shes pretty?

when i hold ur hand
do u think that
im just another girl
or do u think
im lucky to have her?

when u kiss me
do u think
its just another kiss
or do u think
"i love her so much!"?

when i walk by u
my heart skips a beat

when i hold ur hand
im glad im urs

when i kiss u
i no i love u

u make me feel like
i can do anything
i put my mind 2

when we r together
i never want 2 part

can i fully love u
and not get hurt?
i guess i will take that chance

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  • 15 years ago

    by Freedom

    Its a nice simple poem,with nice words and good rhyme :) well done

  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Wow this poem is so sweet i love it
    i liked it so much i put it on my favorites list

  • 16 years ago

    by AnnieBananie

    I think your poems are great. Better grammer would be a good idea. Capitalize what needs to be capitalized and spell things correctly. Other than that, I think your poems are absolutely wonderful! Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    I love the poem, but one thing, you need to fix the grammer, the i's need to be capitalized, ex: I, do not use slang, ex: u, use the full word ex:you, capitalize the beggining of stanzas and sentences, not saying this isnt a good poem, i love the poem, fix the grammer and youll get more comments!!! i give it a 5/5!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kodi

    Aww.I really admire this poem.

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