Deep inside

by JeanTessaRose   Oct 19, 2007


The 1st draft

the one thing deep down inside me is everything we have and had
nothing cant take that away from you
but you cant see what your doing to me inside

I'm fighting it everyday
trying to keep me together
but from all the fighting and crying

all i realize and need
is you

the 2nd draft:

The one thing deep down inside is everything we have and had.
nothing cant take that away but you cant see your truly doing to me.
I'm fighting it everyday
trying to keep myself together but from all the fighting and crying to keep you in my memory
after all this time i finally realized
i need you

by me and my best friend Andrea rose

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