I liked this poem, its a bit short would have loved it to be longer. but I can really see where you are coming from. When a best friend leaves you for his/her boyfriend/girlfriend. Great Write!- SS

Well definitely not a good poem in structure but I still appreciate that it came from your heart
YOu can definitely improve dear
4/5

keep writing
dont loose heart by the ratings
learn and grow

your friend,
Rohan

Aww this one is amazing

I appreciate that this came from your heart. I think you could have gone on with it. You cut yourself off. You need to be confident in yourself. YOU CAN DO IT!

People seem leave with no reasion at all and its very depression at times it could be a good thing though but you don't know until they come back good job writen 5/5

Very well written! I like it!!!

Sad poem but true ...it happens all the time
loved your poem

Nice poem... love it

This was a short poem but it was still written from your heart so thats why i like it so much!

This is a short poem but really cool.

I like this, I like short and to the point. It's true , it could flow a little better but it realy is quite good. Let's see more.

This is sad,but good poem

I like the short and sweet ones. ur rating seems to be a lil low on this one for some reason. people haven't got a clue what poetry is sometimes.

A short, yet sad poem. I sensed the feeling and emotion behind your words well.
Good job.

Greta xx

Wow this poem is sad but good.=)

Sad poem, but i like it...u can feel the feeling behind it

O that was so sad, but i loved it. It was short but so heartfelt. keep it up. 5/5