The evil

by adrian   Oct 20, 2007


I move like the shadows of night
i kill like the sea's of might
I'm never heard
I'm never seen
I'm the evil in you

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  • 18 years ago

    by I Want To Forget But All I Do Is Remember

    I really enjoyed that poem. it was very very nice... you've got some god given talent which is more than anyone can say for me... but you should keep it up and write more...

    *when you love someone never let them go*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Oooh! That's cool. Short and sweet. And succinct. Impacting.

  • 18 years ago

    by TAYLOR

    Luv it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Great great job...

    p.s whats it like in australia

  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    I like it, it is short but very powerful, it has good atmosphere and last line is truly effective. I enjoyed reading it, it could be longer but you described your topic, which is great, on excellent way. Well done, it deserves 5.5

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