Amazing, it reminds me of shakespeare, really good.

Beautiful! The language was just amazing and it flowed perfectly. I loved the repitition in the first and last stanzas, it was very effective. Well done *5/5*

You are an absolute AMAZING writer!!
I'm now adding you to my favorites
so wonderful
5/5

Yet again, a sweetly written piece you have here which also showed great emotions of sadness. Style great, I like how you've been experimenting with styles you have been doing a great job. You have talent as i've told you before. Keep on writing. ~Mel

Honostly, I did not really like this peice. It was good. But not my style.
Good job!

Amber...

Oh beautiful, Im not much into love poems usually but this was fun to read. Ole Eng made it unique and drew me into it more since it was lacking the clicheness. It flowed very well. It was just awesome....The 3rd stanza was purely divine...the words still swimming round my head like an overplayed melody...thanks for the poetic treat. 5/5 you deserve nothing less

Greatly written and very original, you picked good form and managed to express emotions through the poem in a great way.
I like the rhymes, they add great effect.
My favorite stanza is:

-Thy heart of mine, was once divine
Afore thou deed to part
For thy shall vow, That I am now
A lost forsaken heart-

Keep up!

It is really interesting, I like the last stanza the most. You have really effective ending in it and some lines totally impress me. Well done, I love the way that you wrote this, very emotional and deep. I enjoyed reading it.

This poem is absolutely fantastic, I love it's unique style and your flow and choice of words was perfect. The way the words are repetitive really catches the readers eye, fantastic write 5/5 GG23

You're a great writer. I like the way you wrote it.

5/5

Keep writing!!!

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Wallace, this one is very creative and it has the Shakespearean quality :). Loved the anglo-saxon style and the flow is great. 5/5 all the way

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Beautiful poem! Great job on it! I'm not much for roamnce poems but this one pulled me right in!! I'll give it a 5/5! It was kind of Shakespearish.....I like the way you wrote it! Great job,,,,keep it up!

This one was pretty good.. not my favorite one of urs, but overall it was good. keep it up!!! :o]

"For thy shall vow, That I am now
Someone's forsaken heart"

Holy crap, how I loved those lines. They were beautifully penned, as was the enitre poem.

I found this to be elegantly written and filled with so much beauty, despite the tones of sadnesses in it.

You have a talent, for poety, I have really enjoyed every poem of your's that I have read.

Keep writing, and I shall keep reading.

I've always liked this style of writing.
And you, you have taken it to the next level.
The flow was amazingly done.
The emotions and depth were well thought out.

I love the way that you used old English in this poem it really helped convey a meaning and helped the structure :D xxx alex xxx

Ohh. i liked this. usually i dont like old english poems because the rest of the poem usually doesn't fit right. this was fabulous. i had the same reaction in the first stanza like i did in the last line of the other. it wasny quite a shiver but it was still good.

i loved:
Thy heart of mine, was once divine
Afore thou deed to part
For thy shall vow, That I am now
Someone's forsaken heart

WONDERFUL. 5/5

Whoa, this poem was simply alluring!!!! I enjoyed it very much! ^____^!! Very elegant indeed!

"Thy heart of mine, was once divine
Afore thou deed to part
For thy shall vow, That I am now
A lost forsaken heart"

Beloved Christ Jesus.

You have such talent, I have came across such beautiful poems before but you capture such beautiful thoughts to the reader.

That last four lines...

Such memories sparked through my mind... such memories that were though once forgotten, now remembered.

This poem, such tragic anger, hate, and desolateness is the source of fuel entering my body. Those loved ones... they are all coming back...

How I felt so happy... so bliss... until the day they left me... all alone... heart broken.

*Added to Favorite Poems*

_[Deathly'Amore]

Beautiful! Love it all...the style....flow...word choices....rhyming...all flawless!

Very well constructed using the form and Old English....impressive!
Take care, Debbie