Once again the poem was perfect, flow and word choice absolutely amazing. The amount of love and heart you put into your poems is outstanding - very well done 5/5 GG23

Another great poem, great wording and flow. it was so sweet and heartfelt, i really enjoy reading your poems now!

Excellent, I love the last line really blend in with the title. Again your imagery was fantastic, very detailed and I love your emotions, so strong and vibrant. Great work 5/5

A beautiful and sensual piece! I did think it could be a bit longer but other then that the emotions were raw and the imagery was amazing and blew me away. Well done *5/5*

Wow, this one impressed me, I like it a lot, so far so good, I'm going to add you to my favorites lol.. Very nice.

I loved every bit of it. Your rhyming was really great in this one. My favorite stanza is:

Repetitively kissing velvet lips upon mine.
Hand massages my face
Blue eyes glaring with passion
I could be in no better place.

Great Piece

5/5

Wow, one amazing show of emotion. The passion in this poem is very unique. Liked the structure and rhymes as well, 5/5

Aww omg that gave me chills, no wonder it's a winner this week! i'm guessing you did pretty decent in your contest. nice job i loved it, and it made me think of me and my baby. lol nice job though, it was great

I didnt u could write this good, lol

I simply love this piece, right from the start it jumps out at you and stands aside from any other poem of this type. I think the imagery is outstanding and the idea is really unique.

"Your heartbeat making mine weak."
I think that sentence needs an "is" or "heartbeat's". That's a tiny thing that doesn't take the shine off this wonderful poem.

Very nice poem.

~Pete.

This is a beautiful peice i love the imagery and its a really unique form of writing great work :) 5/5

--emz--

Gr8 wOrk... :)