Possesion (attempt 1)

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 23, 2007


Endless fears
as i hide
from these voices inside
Icy hands
grip my throat
and take my breath away
my mind is stolen
till i scream
and lose control
these dark demons
steal my soul
possessing my mind
possessed by their insanity
till i rampage like an animal
I'm crazy
I'm insane
running in the dark
never to be the same

I'm working on a better one on th same subject,,,this was just a brainstorm....comments would be nice and I'll return the favor)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good, I thought it was nice and simple and easy flowing. Maybe alittle too simple on the otherhand. Could bea little more creative. But it was a good try. And I see no reason to not give it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    The true meaning of pocession would be control I feel you gave that control away but there is no reason for why they want to pocess you what do you have they want this would I think make your work and message more clear for the reader to understand Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by anna

    Great job :]. acutaly i was writing a poem but i got writers block gah. anyway your poem gave me an dea for mine, dont worry i dindt copy you in anyway. 5/5

    p.s r/c bk

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