Regret

by Cherish   Oct 23, 2007


I may be able to forgive..but neva forget
i sunken by all the memorable regret
take back time...when i was me
take it back and then you will see.
was i happy? was i pleased?
i was the one who was always teased.
and i guess i have changed, if not for the better?
But my hearts started a long love letter.

The other night was awful, i had drank too much
but i regret the second i felt his touch.
I'm not like that, i promise you all
I promise myself this when i do fall.
It all went so fast, but i cannot forget
I'm drowning by all my miserable regret..x

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    A few things, but it was a good poem. I did give it a 5|5, because it was amazing.

    In the first stanza it was just spelling and stuff; neva = never, it makes it neater and not so slangy. I sunken= I'm sunken. hearts= heart has

    Second stanza, only one thing; ". . . had drank too much." << take out had.

    Other than that amazing poem. Best I've read so far of yours. Though only 3 today, it's still the best. (:

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