This is good. Check you spelling though. I can tell that you hate having people stabbing you in the back. It's a good thing you used poetry instead of a real kill fest!

This a bit woerd, but I like it.

4/5

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Its different to other poems i have read but i still like it, i like the way you used repetition, great work

5/5

Wow...very dark and strong word usage.....liked it! Keep it up! 5/5