I'm never turning back

by kati   Oct 25, 2007


When I love you you leave.
When I hate you you stay.
When I need you your never here and when I don't want your always near.

You try to say your good but i know better than that.
Just let me go let me be, wonder away and never turn back.

I'll be better off with out you.
Can't you see your hurting me, killing me?
You never really cared.
Just turn your back on me like you did before.
Don't bother to call cause I'm not yours anymore.

You have no power over me.
Can't you see you'll never change my mind.
I don't need you anymore so i guess this is goodbye.

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  • 16 years ago

    by adrian

    There is nothing to say but great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Benjamin AmbersCry

    Beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Tripp

    Good poem :D.

    I just have one suggestion. Try to organize your writing into stanzas (sections), like in my stuff. It makes it a lot more appealing to the eye, as well as make it easier to discern a pattern, etc from.

    Other than that, this was really good. Really emotional. keep it up.