Last goodbye

I do like this poem, but I feel like it could be a bit broader if you know what I mean. To me as it is now it's great, but in giving it a twist or adding another stanza or two might give it that edge which you definitly push this to a 5 in my book.

Would love to hear your own thoughts behind this poem.

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Wow this poem is amazing!! very deep and I love the way that you illustrated every part in great detail. I loved it!! keep it up, gave it a 5/5. also I'd love it if you'd read some of my poems and comment/RATE them. thanks alot!!

Great... there really deep feelings, i felt this poem as i read it....

Very deep, thats exactly how i feel

Very sad, but yer very well written, i gave u a 5!