Wings

by my demons   Oct 25, 2007


Broken pale wings
as i continue to stare at the Grey sky
longing to fly free
over the hills to wards salvation
never will i be free
i have broken my wings

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  • 18 years ago

    by Oracle

    Very depressing in my opinion. i still love it. it has a very cool meaning to it all and something that we can all call truth.
    :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    Thats really good even though its just one verse
    And I usually like longish poems
    Still Its very good
    'broken wings'
    I like that
    :)

    Nadia

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    I like the style in this poem! i think its unique and thats what makes it great!
    5/5

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