Comments : A Wilting Rose

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Excellent.Beautifully sad.Imaginitive.Fantastic Imagery.Deep emotions.Great wording.
    I could write alot of great qualitys about this poem.

    Great job as usual,
    A definit 5/5,
    Keep writing,
    Rado

  • 16 years ago

    by Epistemo

    Wow really good...REALLY good..You should keep writing more..made me kinda sad there..

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    Wow, one of the best metaphors I had ever seen. A really nice job with the rhyming and emotion expressing. Liked it very much 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    The expresion is simply amazing.
    Words seem to fail me.
    beautiful.
    Kat xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is beautiful. The imagery, description and metaphors in it you wrote were excellent. I could really feel how you are feeling. The rhyming was impressive, as was the flow. I like the concept of it, and although it is short, it says a lot, I love that. :]
    Well done, 5/5

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    This was beautiful and I can relate a lot to it, its how I feel right now. Your flow was nice and pure, keep up the good work. *5/5*

  • Sad, yet very beautiful. I liked this poem, the way you wrote it. You definately explained the feeling quite well in this short poem. Great job. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    I felt really inspired by this piece..love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    Its interesting how you chose to display this poem and the whole wilting rose really worked, nice job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Once again a fantastic title that will lure the reader in, the imagery in the first few lines were terrific. Every rose must die someday no matter how well it was taken care of. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    I like it a lot. great comparison

  • 16 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    Wow. great poem. && great imgination. i liked it alot. 5/5