Awwww that soooooooo CUTE!!!!!! ^^

Awwww I LOVE IT!!! Its sooooo sweet! made me smile sooo much!

Wow kyle, that was really good!!! im soooo happy u found sumone, an ur not hurting anymore!!!! good job!!! :-)

Oh wow!!... that was just AMAZING.. i really love this. its a wonderful poem. im so glad to hear that your this happy again :)

Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow!!...truely amazing & beautiful!!!!

Brooke<3

Omgosh kyle!!! that is like amazing! seriously i cried! just like everyone has said...its just amazing when i read it i can feel your honesty and passion in it! i love it!!! ur flippen amazing i can't wait to read more!!!
-cait

Awe =]
this is so sweet :)
im glad your happy <333

This is great!
One of the best poems i've read in awhile.
There definetly need to be more Kyles in this world,haha!

This is so cute! theres so much passion! beautiful poem :)

Awwwww wow <3 that was beautiful. That Kali girl must be really speical ;)

Well shut my mouth and hand me some doghnuts lol....that was good..i liked it very much soo
keep it up bree

Awww. :]]
That was so damn sweet.
I'm envious.

Everything about this poem was perfect. Don't you dare change a thing! Lmao. :]]

Marvelous job. Overall: 5.5
-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow, never expected that to happen, This is more a story than a poem. Maybe if you try to build it differently... Nice story though 4/5

Beautiful :') lol 5/5 again!

Another beautiful poem. It's really great. You put your feeling well. The structure was a little of and it would look better if it was in stanzas, but it's still beautiful. I'll still give you 5/5

Keep up the great work.

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I LOVE IT :):):)

Kyle i dont understand wat is happning here.

we have spoken for so long. why are you inlove with me?