PRESENT SENSE

That is amazing! Oh how I love the way you put that. It really does make me happy the way words can be strung together to give so much meaning and emotion. Easy, simple, everyday words, but yet put together in such a way and they can move mountains.

"I am a will be
to be pondered in future reflections
of tomorrow's yesterday,
but for right here right now
I'm an am is."

^That part- WOW! I think many people (in fact everyone) probably feels this way about themselves in relation to their lives. And all that matters is captring this momnet, being in this moment. I congratualte you on this poem. It is a great piece of work. Kepp it up. =]
--Viola