Walls

by Koreena   Oct 29, 2007


Sitting here in my room
staring at the floor
and tears roll down my cheeks
from this sadness i can't ignore

no one around to listen
no one around to care
except my walls so silent
so cold and so bare

they seem to be haunting me
mocking my every cry
just like people in my life
always just passing by

these walls are reminders
of people i want to forget
the people who caused this pain
people who caused my regret

silently they torment me
just sitting there with no remorse
watching me tear myself inside
their emotions just too hoarse

they're too good to console me
too good to try to help
just like people in my life
the cards i was dealt

no one around to listen
no one around to care
except for my walls so silent
so cold and so bare

*Copyrighted By Koreena*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Taz

    Wow that deserves a 5/5 for that poem!!!!!!!!

    i luved it!!!!!!!!

    ~TaZ~

  • 16 years ago

    by Scott Nickel

    Like all of your poems this one comes from far deeper parts of your soul than I could ever hope to pull emotions from (let alone place them on a sheet of paper). Here I am toying with understanding emotion, and here you are, miles ahead, with such understanding that it stings your conviction. Yes you have such conviction in your feelings that I could only hope for...

  • 16 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    *whistles* Thats one HECK of a poem....
    I feel like that almost everyday when I'm depressed......
    Its a BRILLIANT poem
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

    Nadia/Fading Memories

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Joe Rhoades

    Very good poem hunnie...i just wish you wernt soo sad...i wish i could do something to take all the sadness away