GoodBye my Friend!

by James Weatherbee   Oct 29, 2007


I try to be perfect;
but I just get kicked;
when I am down;
cant smile, only frown;
I let down my guard;
life's too hard;
when I opened my heart;
thats when it did start;
all the hurt and pain;
nothing was left to gain;
I clutch my shirt;
I just cant stop the hurt;
in my breaking heart;
so this is the true start;
of the End;
Good Bye my Friend!

This poem is not for my ex I just wanted to write the pain I have felt losing both loved ones and friends, yes I did feel this way losing my ex, but its not specifically for her.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Once you open ur heart instead of lettin love in u actually get alot of hurt inside
    I love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5. great poem. love the strength of the words and emotion. excellent work.

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Great write James!! good work.. i loved the emotion you put into this one, again.. you are great! i loved how you wordes these lines..
    so this is the true start;
    of the End;
    Great job again!! Keep it up!!!!

    <<Kristina>>

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