Wow,,,,i loved this one too...your poems are awesome! Lots of imagery and emotions. Keep this up! Your doing great! :) 5/5

I really like this poem.
great thought. and imagery.
it makes ones imagination start running.
well said and well written
great work.
-alicia

Wow, this is a very amazing poem.
i love it =)

You didn't deserve a 4, neither did you a 5. But I'm nice so I gave you a 5. Thank me. I fell in love with the last stanza. It was perfect. But you seemed to be forcing the rhyme pattern upon it which a big no-no. Comment and rate mine too. Terima kasih. Sorry. I can't speak Indonesian Malay. Only Bahasa Melayu. Heh.

Thank You,your poetry is spectacular!

Wow, very powerful poem. Flowed the right way. 5/5

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This poem is beautiful, I really like the way you wrote it, it is so powerful and atmosphere that you created in it is truly excellent, so emotional and original. Well done!

I love how you used repetition in this poem, it really brought everything together and helped the flow. Your writing is wonderful. *5/5*

The repetition throughout this poem was great. I enjoyed it and found it effective. The flow was smooth and just flowed straight through without any bumps. I found this to be sweet and capturing. Well done. 5/5 ~mel

I thought this poem was very well written and It really painted a picture in my mind which many poems can't do! Keep it up!

Another one good at getting to the point and an interesting read. I would suggest replacing 'much' with 'very' in this line...'that feel so much strong'. I still give it a 5/5 though!

Loads of emotions..
loads of words that i can treasure so much

love this one!

And again another beautiful poem. I look forward in reading your future poems. Excellent vocabulary. Never stop writing! :)

This was really well done. Great job!

This has to be my fave from the ones I read today! Just flawlessly beautiful. Each word held such an immense amount of meaning that savored each word while reading it. WOnderfully done. *5/5*

I loved this, there was so much emotion, i liked most of the rhmying, but some did seem a little forced, the flow was great, and the repition was also magnificent, great work 5/5