Bucket Of Roses

by FridusBlueheaven   Oct 29, 2007


Title : Bucket Of Roses
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

A bucket of roses wasted in my dream
They're beautiful and harmful as they seem
Then simply the thorn hurt both my hands
I've tried to be good, but still that I can't

A bucket of roses, the smile of broken heart
Complete souls are there and never be apart
Once I'm hurt, I'm petrified like a stone
Red and white, that's my blood and my bone

A bucket of roses, failure of brokenhearted man
He's been trying hard, he doesn't want an end
But the faith has sealed, the roses won't ever grow
The brokenhearted man seemed too hard to let go

A bucket of roses, they live in the world of fake
The more they try and the less is what they can take
The brokenhearted man will always there to wait
And he'll never stop trying, won't be tired of it

A bucket of roses, a never ending guiltiness
Guiding lights are gone with faithless happiness
The thorns come inside the man, he's crying at once
But he'll still here, won't go anywhere just to run

A bucket of roses, she'll never have it for him
Maybe not today or maybe only in his dream
He'll always be there, place where he used to be
And the feeling inside will always be a mystery

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Very niice poemm......it had a niice flow to it also....my favorite line was....

    Red and white, that's my blood and my bone

    lol i dont know why but i thought that was a rele good line!! lol

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    First off , the title was beautiful and really captured my attention. I loved you choice of words, it created a flawless imagery. Although some parts did not flow well due to the force of rhyme, it was overall beautiful.

    "A bucket of roses, a never ending guiltiness
    Guiding lights are gone with faithless happiness"
    ^I love these two lines .. perfect.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    A bucket of roses, the smile of broken heart
    Complete souls are there and never be apart
    Once I'm hurt, I'm petrified like a stone
    Red and white, that's my blood and my bone"

    loved your choice of words. I must say after I got the comments I was excited to read over more of yours compared to some of the others..... anyhow this poem wasn't cliche at all which is even better, keep it up :) 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    You just barely pulled off the rhyming in this one. Some of the words are too far apart to truly rhyme. Still sweet though and got the point across to the reader. ^-^

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    I love the title!!! The Poem is great too.

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