Beautiful poem....it flowed beautifully too. Lots of good imagery thoughout this poem....a wonderful write. Keep up the amazing work! definately a 5/5! Keep it up!

Wonderful

Love your poems, so i was wondering if you could give me some feedback on some of mine, it would be greatly appreciated, i love the way you express your feelings REALLY GREAT

keep it up

elizabeth

Wow! Excellent Poem! Love your work, i got your message and this was the first poem i've read of yours and i think its very meaningful and exquisitly metaphorical.

Wow,
i love this poem too.
great work.
your too amazing.
wonderful talent you have =)

The meaning and emotions flowing through this piece are beautiful =) There's a few words missing here and there to make the sentences more complete but other then that I loved this poem =) It reminds me of the old world romance =) Very wonderful job on this 5/5
~*Rhea*~

This is really beautiful, and the emotion is really just dripping from this. The only thing I would change in it are the words that are missing here and there. It's a bit distracting, but I really like how your voice is so obviously there. A lot of people's writing lacks that. You've definitely got talent!

This is really good. the emotion and powerful-ness of this poem is so strong and evident. congradulations on another beautiful piece of writing!

Ally. x

Amazing poem great flow as well and also the imagery was great this poem is beautiful and the emotion in this poem shows as well :) 5/5

--emz--

Its really good i like the way you write and all....umm go to my poems and vote for some of mine and if you want leave a comment behinde too...
steph

Wow, this is a really beautiful poem. Even though it's sad, I loved it. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Oh my, WOW! This poem was absolutely beautiful, amazing, and there are soo many other words I could use to describe it! You have a natural talent and I could see it perfectly all throughout this poem. The title alone caught my attention, great job! I love the way you use your words and how neatly organized it is. 5/5 !!!! <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

I love the title!!! The Poem is great too.

You just barely pulled off the rhyming in this one. Some of the words are too far apart to truly rhyme. Still sweet though and got the point across to the reader. ^-^

A bucket of roses, the smile of broken heart
Complete souls are there and never be apart
Once I'm hurt, I'm petrified like a stone
Red and white, that's my blood and my bone"

loved your choice of words. I must say after I got the comments I was excited to read over more of yours compared to some of the others..... anyhow this poem wasn't cliche at all which is even better, keep it up :) 5.5

First off , the title was beautiful and really captured my attention. I loved you choice of words, it created a flawless imagery. Although some parts did not flow well due to the force of rhyme, it was overall beautiful.

"A bucket of roses, a never ending guiltiness
Guiding lights are gone with faithless happiness"
^I love these two lines .. perfect.

Well done *5/5*

Very niice poemm......it had a niice flow to it also....my favorite line was....

Red and white, that's my blood and my bone

lol i dont know why but i thought that was a rele good line!! lol

<3 i love you silly